Affsum Session: Copywriting Clinic
Thursday
Dec 18, 2008
Yes, that’s right. It’s been MONTHS since Affiliate Summit East 2008, and we’re less than a month away from Affiliate Summit West 2009. And I’m just now getting around to giving you the skinny and my notes on this incredibly helpful session. Why now? Now there’s video:
The panel consisted of:
- Lisa Riolo, Founder, Hammock Ventures (Moderator)
- Adam Gilad, CEO, Gilad Creative Media, Inc.
- Scott Polk, CEO, Purplestream Marketing
- Anik Singal, CEO, Affiliate Classroom Inc.
As I mentioned, this was a fantastic panel. In fact, I might consider this hands down the best panel I’ve attended at any trade show. It was FULL of useful information. Watch the video for yourself (ignore my head in the front row
) or check out my notes!
Bullet Point Review!
- Copy writing is salesmanship in writing (Anik).
- Headlines are huige – your copy can suck if your headline kicks butt, but the other way around doesn’t work (Anik).
- Simple video dresses up your content (Anik).
- Making an ugly order button actually helps because it stands out – believe it or not, conversions go through the roof (Anik).
- Think of headlines as plot points (Adam).
- Act I is the Familiar World. Turn pain into calling. If you can articulate their pain better than they can – it will bring trust & bring them to the calling (Adam).
- Act 2 is the Road of Trials. Meet new allies and villains – in copy writing allies can be testimonials, villains are negative – brings you to the death of the protagonist (Adam).
- Act 3 is the Resolution. Give them to sword to slay the dragon – the order information and a promise of how great it will be when they get there (Adam).
- Write for your reader (Scott).
- Optimize against the competition (Scott).
- 350-450 words is a good start (Scott).
- Use main keywords you’re optimizing for in the 1st sentence, twice in the first 200 words (Scott).
- Editorial content is what powers the web (Scott).
- People have difficulty getting started, but the key is tight copy.
- Use of active verbs – creates motion & engages users.
- Try to evoke senses when selling -> smell/scent works well. They’re related to positive emotions.
- Listen & read things around you – it will inspire you to get started.
- Process of writing and process of editing are two very different processes.
- Take 12 hours in between the creative of writing and the technical of editing as a buffer period.
- Build momentum – make them want to turn the page (Adam).
- Take note of evocative words.
- There are good books that are just lists of words.
Points brought up during the Q&A
- Adjectives are your enemy.

- Reading out loud helps develop the rhythm of language.
- How does attention span factor in?
- -> The story should be compelling enough and people are drawn in.
- -> The sub-headlines should tell the story.
- Never assume people have read the page before or after on a website – have good site navigation too.
- Tone – more professional robot or real person writing?
- -> That personal aspect is what draws people in.
- -> Talk to them in your voice.
- -> Consistency of voice is important.
- Humorous content is vital.
- What can brands with stuffier businesses do to liven up without adding personality?
- -> If you can’t do it within the funnel, ask affiliates to try stuff or do stuff elsewhere on the site.
- Any tools to check what you’ve written to improve it’s SEO?
- -> SEO Toolkit – keyword density analyzer
- -> Make title tag for search engines
- Have depth – don’t be too dumbed down.
- Supporting information is good, but don’t clutter the conversion funnel.
- It’s difficult to speak in absolutes and don’t disrupt the process.
- Multi-variant testing with copy gives you a realistic picture of what’s going on.
- Pop your sentences into Google to see how many others use those same phrases.
- Copyscape can analyze your content to see how unique it is.
I easily took the most notes of the conference at this session. Great tips all around, and I espeically loved hearing Adam relate copy writing to screen writing – my major in college was Theatre Arts, emphasizing on dramatic writing, so that was a nice way to bring together my visions of what I was going to do for a career and the reality of what I am doing for a career. Very awesome and I hope to see similar clinics like this offered at future shows!
Cribbed Content for August 1st
Friday
Aug 1, 2008
My 5 year wedding anniversary is tomorrow. It’s amazing how time flies, and how much has changed in my life in the last 5 years. But I’m happy with where things have gone – generally. So while I’m spending a romantic anniversary weekend in Lake Tahoe, you can chew on these links and I’ll catch you on Tuesday.
- XM and Sirius Satellite radio companies finalized their merger this week. Details are still to come. I really am anxious to learn what stations are surviving – I don’t want to just change the station to find that one of my favorites doesn’t exist anymore.
- Google was all set to purchase social bookmarking/sharing site Digg for the princely sum of $200 million, but looks like The Google bailed on the deal. Are they toying with Digg? Time will tell.
- Vertical Response posted a great idea for building your mailing list using your business cards. Great strategy just in time for Affiliate Summit. Remember, it’s not too late to order new cards with PsPrint. I ordered my new batch a couple days ago and I can’t wait to see the results!
- A new forum for affiliate marketing was launched last weekend, AffSpot.com. I joined up and I’ve been having a blast so come on over and say hi!
Have a great weekend and go rent a movie from Netflix!
Cribbed Content for June 6th
Friday
Jun 6, 2008
The first week of June is over and done with and summer officially starts in 15 days!
- Lisa Picarille reported back on the Affiliate Thing podcast from a dinner last week about a potential industry regulatory body, tentatively called Performance Marketing Alliance. They’ll be starting small, hoping to have a blog, board elections, and sponsorships over the next six months, and hope to launch early next year. They hope to be able to be ready with some kind of announcement by August’s Affiliate Summit East in Boston.
- In my all consuming quest to increase the page rank of this blog, I read a really good article over at Marketing Pilgrim on sculpting page rank.
- Search widget Lijit has teamed up with b5media to improve their service. Longtime readers will note that I had this widget up for awhile and when I redesigned it disappeared. I’ve put it back up for awhile – we’ll see if it does any good.
- Sam Harrelson started an Affiliate Marketing room on FriendFeed. I joined – should be a good place to share some ideas and links. Hopefully I get some good stuff to share with you next week!
- Are you a green affiliate? By virtue of the work-from-home industry, most affiliates are more eco-conscious in using less paper, not burning fossil fuels by commuting, etc. So now boast that fact proudly with a free Green Affiliate laptop sticker from Affiliate Summit. Just fill out your address and Shawn Collins will lovingly pack up one and send it your way!
- UnsubCentral and the Email Sender &Provider Coalition (ESPC) are teaming up for a free webinar/conference call on June 10th about abiding by the changes in the CAN-SPAM laws that are coming up. I signed up make sure PsPrint will be compliant – if you do any email marketing you should too!
That’s all folks! Have a great weekend – I’ll be enjoying fireworks tomorrow night at McAfee Coliseum in Oakland – hopefully also enjoying the A’s kicking the Angel’s butts!





